hi Zoe, pse can you resend as a word doc as v difficult to read as is .. <br><br>thanks!<br><br>Sian<br><br><div class="gmail_quote">On Feb 1, 2008 7:48 PM, zoe young <<a href="mailto:zoe@esemplastic.net">zoe@esemplastic.net</a>> wrote:<br>
<blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="border-left: 1px solid rgb(204, 204, 204); margin: 0pt 0pt 0pt 0.8ex; padding-left: 1ex;">hi there<br>some comments in the text.<br>overall, there are useful sections and with a reasonable rewrite, the<br>
summary can be made into something of value to diverse audiences.<br>meanwhile a lack of clear definitions to start with make it hard to follow<br>many of the claims, and the odd practical example of tendencies noted<br>would help to back up some rather vague statements.<br>
am also not sure about the 'tone' of parts of it, which seem to veer<br>between 'objective academic overview for those who know nothing' and<br>'partisan advice to the misguided media activist' with no clear pointers<br>
to help the reader ride these shifts.<br>hope it's helpful,<br>cheers<br>zoe<br><div><div></div><div class="Wj3C7c"><br><br><br>On Fri, February 1, 2008 10:56 am, Andre Spicer wrote:<br>> Hi all<br>><br>> We have to provide the NGPA programme with a short report. I have<br>
> written something up largely based on our report to the ESRC. Keep in<br>> mind that it should be short. Any comments would or suggested changes<br>> are welcomed.<br>><br>> Andre<br>><br>> ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~<br>
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