the breaks were me - there was lot of content to upload and i simply didn't have time to weed them out.<br><br>i'll go through it this evening,<br><br>alistair<br><br><br><br><div class="gmail_quote">2009/10/8 Jon Leighton <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:j@jonathanleighton.com">j@jonathanleighton.com</a>></span><br>
<blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="border-left: 1px solid rgb(204, 204, 204); margin: 0pt 0pt 0pt 0.8ex; padding-left: 1ex;">Hiya,<br>
<br>
Sorry to always be harping on about the style guide, but there are a few<br>
pages in the GCS section which have manual line breaks applied in the<br>
paragraph, for example:<br>
<a href="http://climatecamp.org.uk/actions/climate-swoop-2009/accommodation" target="_blank">http://climatecamp.org.uk/actions/climate-swoop-2009/accommodation</a><br>
<br>
Please can this be fixed? I will at some point add some code to the<br>
paste filter to do this automatically but for now it needs to be manual.<br>
Will make it more explicit in the style guide too.<br>
<br>
Also some comments on this page:<br>
<a href="http://climatecamp.org.uk/actions/climate-swoop-2009/swoop-information" target="_blank">http://climatecamp.org.uk/actions/climate-swoop-2009/swoop-information</a><br>
<br>
* The headings are h3 - we should use h2 instead of jumping straight<br>
from h1 to h3.<br>
* The page is basically a number of lists of things, so it would be good<br>
to actually use lists (numbered or bulleted where appropriate)<br>
* Can we rename it to "What to bring", and then move the bit about<br>
transport to the transport page<br>
* The last title is in all caps - it should not be<br>
* Generally the text has clearly been pasted in from an email. When<br>
putting text up we need to read through it and ensure it make sense in<br>
the context of the website. For instance, saying "keep an eye on<br>
<a href="http://climatecamp.org.uk/actions/climate-swoop-2009" target="_blank">http://climatecamp.org.uk/actions/climate-swoop-2009</a> for more details<br>
soon!" does not make sense when you're already on that website.<br>
<br>
Thanks,<br>
Jon<br>
<br>
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