[Cc-webedit] New Website - Design Concept!

Jonathan Leighton j at jonathanleighton.com
Sun Aug 2 14:41:17 BST 2009


On Sat, 2009-08-01 at 11:31 +0100, Chris Kitchen wrote:
> oh and just on a grammar point, should it be 'climate camp is a fast
> growing, diverse grassroots movement of people taking action on
> climate change'?  or just drop the 'diverse', but then i guess its
> probably text that has been formally agreed somewhere.

The text is the first sentence from the postcard flyers which were
produced. I'm very happy for it to be rewritten a bit, and now is the
time (i.e. before Tuesday)!

I think it's important to have a bit about "the biggest threat our world
has known", but at the moment it does make it sound a little like
climate camp is the threat! ;)

Does anyone want to work on making this text really tight?




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