[FlyingBrickAnnouncements] Response to DGR - Please give me feedback!

[allison libertine]

Ramey I love it and I have to echo Claire on the last sentence. overall
it's a damn good representation of what we're about. thanks for writing
this!

On Sun, Jul 1, 2012 at 12:10 AM, <chuje2 at vcu.edu> wrote:

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> wooo this is rad. few wording things though to make the message a little
> more concise: I would say the phrasing for "a month or so ago" is a little
> clunky, i'd suggest "about a month ago". also, "dismayed and dissapointed"
> are kindof similar words doing the same thing for the sentence, maybe it
> only needs one of them?
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