[Cc-webedit] Swoop section - some points

[Jon Leighton]

Hiya,

Sorry to always be harping on about the style guide, but there are a few
pages in the GCS section which have manual line breaks applied in the
paragraph, for example:
http://climatecamp.org.uk/actions/climate-swoop-2009/accommodation

Please can this be fixed? I will at some point add some code to the
paste filter to do this automatically but for now it needs to be manual.
Will make it more explicit in the style guide too.

Also some comments on this page:
http://climatecamp.org.uk/actions/climate-swoop-2009/swoop-information

* The headings are h3 - we should use h2 instead of jumping straight
from h1 to h3.
* The page is basically a number of lists of things, so it would be good
to actually use lists (numbered or bulleted where appropriate)
* Can we rename it to "What to bring", and then move the bit about
transport to the transport page
* The last title is in all caps - it should not be
* Generally the text has clearly been pasted in from an email. When
putting text up we need to read through it and ensure it make sense in
the context of the website. For instance, saying "keep an eye on
http://climatecamp.org.uk/actions/climate-swoop-2009 for more details
soon!" does not make sense when you're already on that website.

Thanks,
Jon