[Cc-webedit] Swoop section - some points

[alistair alexander]

the breaks were me -  there was lot of content to upload and i simply didn't
have time to weed them out.

i'll go through it this evening,

alistair



2009/10/8 Jon Leighton <j at jonathanleighton.com>

> Hiya,
>
> Sorry to always be harping on about the style guide, but there are a few
> pages in the GCS section which have manual line breaks applied in the
> paragraph, for example:
> http://climatecamp.org.uk/actions/climate-swoop-2009/accommodation
>
> Please can this be fixed? I will at some point add some code to the
> paste filter to do this automatically but for now it needs to be manual.
> Will make it more explicit in the style guide too.
>
> Also some comments on this page:
> http://climatecamp.org.uk/actions/climate-swoop-2009/swoop-information
>
> * The headings are h3 - we should use h2 instead of jumping straight
> from h1 to h3.
> * The page is basically a number of lists of things, so it would be good
> to actually use lists (numbered or bulleted where appropriate)
> * Can we rename it to "What to bring", and then move the bit about
> transport to the transport page
> * The last title is in all caps - it should not be
> * Generally the text has clearly been pasted in from an email. When
> putting text up we need to read through it and ensure it make sense in
> the context of the website. For instance, saying "keep an eye on
> http://climatecamp.org.uk/actions/climate-swoop-2009 for more details
> soon!" does not make sense when you're already on that website.
>
> Thanks,
> Jon
>
>
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